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The minutiae of Life & the two minute poem
composting
you are organic
i am more bob the builder
can we fix it?
you are organised
while i seem just chaotic
lost amongst the words
inspiration from a poem by becoming amethyst.
continuing the idea of the two-minute poem; words tumble and must be gathered up, like panning for gold - often you just get the dirt but you'll never know this before you gather it up.
composting
you are organic
i am more bob the builder
can we fix it?
you are organised
while i seem just chaotic
lost amongst the words
inspiration from a poem by becoming amethyst.
continuing the idea of the two-minute poem; words tumble and must be gathered up, like panning for gold - often you just get the dirt but you'll never know this before you gather it up.
posted by Ian russell at 3:20 AM
4 Comments:
What a beautiful poem you have written Ian! Bravo!
thank you so much for your condolence message on my blog!
best wishes!
thanks, abhay.
enjoyed the first one; what a chuckle about relationships and roles within
thanks. actually it started off as a single haiku but, hopefully, they work as one as a regular poem.
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