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Thursday, October 05, 2006

poem haiku

1

haiku are puddles
poems draw from deeper wells
water is water


2

a man of few words
finds haiku a natural
saying what you find


3

writing poetry
takes more than a single breath
ties tongue and blanks mind

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

water is water. Yep. I'm like you..a quick poem writer. I don't sweat and toil. I've been accused of just throwing out first drafts..willy nilly. I do edit, a word here or there. But a poem for me..is a moment..a snapshot. The more I "craft" the more I lie.

Friday, 06 October, 2006  
Blogger Ian russell said...

yes, that is a good way of interpreting it - the first draft is often the closest to my true voice. I find it difficult to hone without embellishment and, for now, for me, a tight poem is a satisfying poem.

Monday, 09 October, 2006  

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