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Monday, October 16, 2006

one deep breath prompt

one deep breath : simple pleasures.

1

a day walking without purpose
mentally sketching
poetry
photos
and
words

2

an empty house, everyone's out
enjoying the quiet
and music
playing
real
loud


*

Susan suggests a backwards Fib this week, so this is what I have done. It was fun. Hey, sometimes when you innocently type something out, you look at it and get an inkling it might be incidental poetry? I seem to do this all the time... is it just me? It's only a bit of nonsense. ;o)


Susan suggests a backwards Fib
this is what I've done
my two fibs
backwards
what
fun!

;o)

7 Comments:

Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

Yeah backward fibs do seem like fun - must have a go some time!

Monday, 16 October, 2006  
Blogger jennifer black said...

Love the juxtaposition of quiet times and loud music. Nicely done.

jb

Monday, 16 October, 2006  
Blogger Jennifer S. said...

yes, I love the contrast too. sound like great pleasures to me.

Monday, 16 October, 2006  
Blogger Tammy Brierly said...

Your haiku makes my head nod in total agreement :) Fab fibs!

Love your facial expression on your blog :)

Monday, 16 October, 2006  
Blogger susanlavonne said...

your "quiet/real loud" had me smiling "real loud" but THEN i read the last fib (and BEST poem ever written i might add :-) and will be reveling all night at the honor of it all! (i revel easily but don't let that disuade you from further "nonsense".)

Monday, 16 October, 2006  
Blogger paris parfait said...

Very clever, Ian! Well done, you!

Tuesday, 17 October, 2006  
Blogger Jodi said...

It does seem like fun. I'm really busy and behind this week, but if I get around to this challenge, I may try it too.

Wednesday, 18 October, 2006  

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