one deep breath prompt
last bus gone, i walk
my shadows waltz around me
down orange lit streets
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the underground breeze
electric rails sing strangely
next train approaching
one deep breath prompt: urban
as I live almost entirely outside of the urban environment thesedays, I had to draw on a few memories as a youth living in London - always walking home from dates and the mole-like existence of the tube commuter.
1 Comments:
I like how you walk and the shadows waltz. It's a nice alliteration and intersting choice of verbs! (I studied abroad in London and fell in love with that city!)
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