one deep breath
one deep breath : the unseen.
guardian angels
watching them when I'm not there
faith, trust, hope and love
*
This week's prompt made me think I'm more of an observational guy and I could appreciate the unseen more. I had a bit of difficulty with 'observing' the unseen without being too literal.
guardian angels
watching them when I'm not there
faith, trust, hope and love
*
This week's prompt made me think I'm more of an observational guy and I could appreciate the unseen more. I had a bit of difficulty with 'observing' the unseen without being too literal.
posted by Ian russell at 12:16 AM
3 Comments:
Beautiful poem, Ian.
I know what you mean. I too have similar problems.
Hmmm, sometimes the word 'too' jumps out at me and jars me. I didn't find this literal. It's powerful.
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